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Tuesday, 4 February 2020

Release Day Ramblings: writer’s voice and brand, memorable characters, and more...

Heir to the Throne, the first book in my brand new royalty fantasy series, is available to download from your favourite retailers now. Books 2 and 3 are releasing soon.




I am always excited and nervous on release day—well, release week—but with this book, this series, I am more so than usual. That’s probably the reason behind my ramblings today! This is my first high fantasy/epic fantasy series—a genre I haven’t written in since my childhood days—so, I’m eager to see what readers think of it. And scared of what they’ll think of it.

There have been more pre-orders for this book than all my previous pre-orders combined, so I know that people are eager to get their hands on it. Just a little pressure, but it’s very welcome. Needless to say, I’m very proud of this trilogy and I believe it will satisfy its target audience. Think Throne of Glass without fae; Game of Thrones without dragons—but with a different mythical creature instead.




The style of writing in this trilogy is different to that of my six urban fantasy books, and of course, the story is worlds apart from my four contemporary romance novels. I switch up my style—and therefore my ‘voice’—depending on the genre I’m writing in and the story that I’m telling. Perhaps that means I don’t have a ‘voice’? And perhaps that’s not a good thing? Rest assured, my ‘voice’ within each individual series is consistent.

One thing that is always the same in all my works, regardless of genre, is the character-driven aspect of them. I try to ensure that my characters are well thought-out and well-developed, and whether or not you agree with the decisions they sometimes make, I ensure that you understand those decisions. That the characters’ actions make sense to you.




Funnily enough, the romance in my fantasy books is subtle; the love story is a proper sub-plot to the action, suspense, and drama—maybe because my contemporary romance novels revolve around the love story, while the action, suspense, and drama form the sub-plots? Still, the characters are the stars of the show; they’re the ones that stay with the reader.

That’s my brand—characters that feel so real, you’ll forget you’re reading fiction. (Catchy little tag line for my author brand, don’t you think? I must get around to making a banner with it. I came up with it ages ago!) My writing ‘voice’ might change a little—or a lot—with the genre, and you might not recognise it when you read my fantasy novels after reading my contemporary romance books—or vice versa—but you’ll know it’s a Neha Yazmin book because of the depths to the characters.

For me, it’s very important that the audience understands the people in my stories as well as I do—without spending half as much time with them as I do. I give my characters a lot of time, think about them for hours and over days, care about them as though they’re real, and I show that on the page. If they’re not real to me, how will the reader believe them? Why would they care? Why should they spend time with my characters if I didn’t bother to spend enough time on them to make them worthy?




Apart from well-rounded characters, here are a few more things that readers can expect from this trilogy—without giving too much away:

1) This series revolves around mythical creatures that I haven’t written about before, with my own take on them. [Hint: I’ve written about vampires (Poison Blood Series), witches, wizards, and shifters (Witch’s Blood Series). I don’t think that I’ve mentioned these creatures in any of my projects, actually. As I said earlier, you can think of this trilogy as ‘Throne of Glass with ______ instead of fae’ or ‘Game of Thrones with _______ instead of dragons, and none of the sexual content, either.’ I’ll fill in the gaps in a future post—I want you to discover this while reading).]

Two) I love a good origin story—I like to explain how the magical beings in my stories came to exist—so this trilogy gets one, too. [We learned how the vampires in my Poison Blood Series came about, and we’ll discover how the witches in the Witch’s Blood Series came to exist when I complete that series.]

Three) No corsets. These books are set in a completely made up fictional world—they’re not inspired by a particular time or place in history—so why would I include something that I don’t believe in? There’s no mention of corsets in this trilogy because they don’t exist in this world. [The best way to describe the setting of these books is “alternative historical fantasy world”.]

Four) The lead character’s body shape is not typical for the genre. Usually, the girls are tiny compared to the big, bear-like love interests, or they’re of medium height, have a small waist and “great boobs”. Aaryana—like all her sisters—is very tall, flat-chested, hardly has any curves, and her training has helped her gain a strong, powerful, muscular, athletic body.

I really hope that readers take to Aaryana like they have to Ellie, Mukti, and Shell, and that they enjoy a series that was inspired by just a single image (below) that I found on the web (see my ‘story behind the story’ blog post here).




Thanks for reading this post. All the links to this new release are below if you want to read it.




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Only the worthy can take the Throne...

In the Kingdom of Adgar, the King or Queen's firstborn is not automatically named Heir to the throne; any of their children can become the next ruler of the land. If they are deemed worthy.

17-year-old Aaryana has competed against her siblings from a young age and is a firm favourite to take the Throne. However, just days before her father is expected to name her his Heir, a scheme is devised to not only take Aaryana out of the running, but also to ruin her reputation completely.

Will her enemies succeed in cheating her out of the throne that she was destined for or will Aaryana and her friends manage to save her from disgrace?

Heir to the Throne is a new epic high fantasy that’s perfect if you’re getting Game of Thrones withdrawal symptoms or missing the Throne of Glass series.

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Monday, 24 July 2017

If I Say Yes Q+A & Benefits of Including Q+As In Your #eBooks

This is a spoiler-free Q&A on my contemporary romance novel, If I Say Yes (Love & Alternatives #1), and at the end of the interview, I will list what I think are the benefits for indie authors to include book-related Q&As at the end of their e-books. I say e-books and not just ‘books’ because, if you’re self-publishing your print versions, then Q&As will only increase the page count, thus increasing the production costs, and in turn force you to price your books at a higher rate, so it not might seem ideal.

If you want to skip the Q&A, it’s in black text; you can scroll down to the blue text for the benefits of author interviews in your self-published books.


Q: What was the main inspiration behind If I Say Yes?

A: The idea for this story just popped into my head one day, out of the blue, in H2 2016. Soon after the third book in my Soulmates Saga came out. Of course, it’s not a completely original idea, as Shell says in the Prologue, but I can’t say for sure why it felt like such a good idea to write this story with my own angle on it.

Ideas come into my head in two main ways. I think of them as raindrops falling on a leaf. Some drops of rain hit the leaf and splatter all over it. It takes time and effort for the water to wend its way back into the original raindrop. Other raindrops fall on the leaf but maintain their original shape, whole and sparkly, wobbling comfortably on the leaf. The idea for this Duology was like that—it came to me complete and in that moment, I knew it from start to finish. I didn’t have to do much; I knew all the story beats and twists and character arcs as though it was a book I’d written already. All I had to decide were the specifics. Exactly how old the MCs were. Where in the UK the story would be set. How many siblings the MCs had. What job they did. The little details. 

Like with most of my books, I saw the ending scene in my head almost soon after I got the idea and the writing process was a way to arrive at that destination. I’m not saying the final scene/segment I ended up writing is exactly how I first saw it, but it’s pretty close. Everything that I write in my books is deliberate. Nothing is an accident or left in there by mistake once I’m done editing it (apart from the odd typo, which we somehow didn’t spot *face palm*). The timing of each revelation or twist (major or minor), each little detail, every thing is there because I think it should be there to provide the reading experience I want to give readers. I’m not saying it’s achieved for every person that picks up the book, but I have a plan and I do what I can and what I feel is right to execute it.

When I got the idea for this duet, I was in the middle of planning/writing two other projects, both of which were in the paranormal romance/urban fantasy genre, and I didn’t think I’d be writing If I Say Yes until I was done with those. But I just couldn’t stop thinking about it and I felt like writing this book more than the existing projects. It’s one of those things that happens to authors when they have multiple story ideas but feel like writing one book more than the others.

Seb’s character however, was inspired by a real life person. A person I’ve never met, mind you, just heard about from a relative of mine. Unlike Seb who’s in his 20s, this person is a teenager actually, around 19 when I heard about him, and is best friends with my cousin’s teenage son, and he’s like the third son in my cousin’s family, having grown up and learned about Bengali culture and tradition from an early age through his friendship with my cousin’s son.

Seen as Seb was going to be Imran’s ‘white best friend’, I didn’t want to go down the predictable route where it’s a culture clash for him when he gets involved in Imran’s wedding to Shell. It would be typical to have Seb question the traditions of Bengali weddings and culture, and find everything new and amusing, not get it and so on. And these guys are supposed to be best friends from childhood, so wouldn’t Seb learn about Bengali culture from his friend? I’m really glad I had that random conversation with my cousin’s wife about her son’s white best friend who feels more a part of his friend’s family than his own. I guess that conversation in 2015 (on my third wedding anniversary) planted the seed for this book?


Q: What did you enjoy most about writing If I Say Yes?

A: Since August 2010, I’ve been spending time with the same group of characters: Mukti, Jamie and co. from my other contemporary romance series, the Soulmates Saga; and Ellie, Christian and co. from the Poison Blood Series. So, it was a pleasure creating and developing a new set of characters to fall in love with. Like making new friends, it was exciting yet nerve-wracking. There was some uncertainty, too: How will things turn out? Did I make the right choices? Will everyone else like them, too?


Q: Do you have a favourite scene in If I Say Yes?

A: I think the scene with Seb in the restaurant where he goes all psycho is my favourite. It was a real turning point for the characters involved and the true colours started showing.


Q: How does the Love & Alternatives series compare to the Soulmates Saga?

A: The Love & Alternatives series isn’t as dark or heavy as the Soulmates Saga, even though it does tackle a few serious issues. It also has a sweeter vibe to it, and the main characters are less troubled and tormented than those in the Soulmates Saga.

If I Say Yes is written from three characters’ POVs and in the first person, with two of those characters having more page time than the third character. It’s the first time I’ve tried this—the Poison Blood Series is written in the first person, but it’s mainly from Ellie’s POV, with a little from Christian thrown in here and there (though Vampire Absolution is entirely from his POV). The Soulmates Saga on the other hand, is written in third person and though it’s mainly the lead protagonists that dominate page time, we do hear from many other characters.

If I Say Yes is more fast-paced than the novels in the Soulmates Saga, but that’s not to say that the books in the Saga are slow-burners, either. The two series are written in different styles, that’s all.


Q: How does Shell compare to Mukti from the Soulmates Saga?

A: Both Shell and Mukti are young British Bangladeshi Muslims that were born and bred in London, but their personalities are very different. They’ve had different upbringings, too, their family dynamics worlds apart:
Shell has a close, loving family and has a great relationship with her parents and siblings, whereas Mukti has always felt like an outsider amongst her kin and that has solidified further when you first meet her in Book 1 of the Soulmates Saga, due to her past and secrets.

Mukti’s past has turned her into someone that doesn’t fully integrate with the world around her—she just does enough to get by. However, she achieves as much as, if not more than, what most young women that haven’t been through what she has do in academia and the work place.

Shell doesn’t have a past or any secrets—it’s in If I Say Yes where her past begins, so to speak. It’s a truly coming of age story for Shell.

They’re both hard-working, professional women, though Mukti is more creative and artistic than Shell.


Q: How do Seb and Imran compare to Jamie from the Soulmates Saga?

A: When you first meet these characters, I’d say Seb and Imran are more instantly likeable than Jamie, Imran more than Seb. The male characters in If I Say Yes are more open and honest with the reader, and have a great friendship with each other, whereas Jamie is an introverted recluse.

Jamie goes through more change and character development in the first book in the Saga though, and you do fall in love with him by the end of the book.

The two best friends in If I Say Yes are so different from each other in terms of personality—Seb is loud, brash, and bit of a commitment-phobe; Imran is the deep thinker, quiet, reserved, but he embraces the idea of settling down with Shell, the perfect woman for him—and they couldn’t be more different from Jamie. 

However, Jamie is like Imran when it comes to settling down; he’s ready for the happy ever after with the woman that he loves. She just needs to get to that phase, too.


Q: Do you have a writing routine? Has it changed over the years?

A: Things have changed a lot since I started writing the first book in the Soulmates Saga in August 2010, my debut published novel. At that time, I was single and working full-time. I wrote during the evenings and weekends and wrote at least 3,000 words each evening, and a whole lot more during the weekends. Now, I’m married, a mum of 1, and out of work due to illness. I suffer from severe, chronic lower-back pain, which worsens considerably if I sit or stand for more than 15-20 minutes.

I wrote over 90% of If I Say Yes while lying in bed, on my stomach. It was hard on the arms and elbows—though, that pain dissipated quickly—but at least my back pain didn’t worsen. My discs didn’t damage further.

Prior to April 2017, I did all my writing—novels and blog posts—in that fashion. Then I found out I was pregnant, and it’s not ideal to be lying on your bump anymore, is it? But I really wanted to write the conclusion to the Love & Alternatives duology—If I Say No—as well as those PNR/UF projects I mentioned earlier, and so I had no choice but to write whilst sitting down. Yes, the pregnancy added to the back pain, worsened it big time, and because I couldn’t take my regular medication for the pain, things were pretty difficult.

It’s only my love—and need—for writing that coerced me to spend a few hours each week sitting and writing. If I didn’t love it so much, I wouldn’t do it. The accompanying pain just wouldn’t be worth it.

And so, I tried to write as much as I could, when I could, though my aim was to write at least a chapter whenever I sat with my laptop, around 1,500 words on average (taking lots of breaks and doing lots of stretches every few minutes). I didn't change my writing methods though, and so, the next time I sat down to write, I went over what I wrote during the previous session, to catch up with what’s happening and get back in the zone, and editing that section as I went. I think most authors do this.

Once the first rough draft of a novel is done, I go back to the beginning and do a quick revision, adding any scenes or descriptions where needed, seeing how the story flows. If I end up adding lots of new material throughout the novel, I will go back and do another quick light round of revision to see how things flow now.

Then I take a break from the manuscript. At least a month.

Afterwards, the real editing begins, and I revise the manuscript to death, until I hate everything I’ve written and think it’s utter rubbish LOL. 

Next, another break. For a month, if I can afford it, or at least 2 weeks.

A few more rounds of serious editing follows and I only stop when I start loathing the book once more and don’t want to lay my eyes on it ever again.

I have become a better editor now though, so the process is more efficient—I did a lot of editing for books, research papers, and blogs in my job in the financial services sector, so I can be very patient with the process. 


Q: What happens in If I Say No?

A: LOL I can’t tell you that! All I will say is that a reader of Book 1 hit the nail on the head when she said it would be “heart-stopping.” Just try to keep an open mind and try to appreciate the sequel for the story that it’s trying to tell.

That's it for the interview. Thanks for reading it! I hope you enjoy the concluding part of this Duology, releasing January 29, 2021.

Have you checked out the Soulmates Saga yet? Keep reading for the Blurb of the first book in the series.


Would you recognise true love if you saw it?

Singer and songwriter Jamie York is suffering from writer’s block. When he meets the unexpectedly inspirational Mukti, Jamie’s creativity knows no bounds and he feels torn. He has to keep seeing her, but what will she make of his tortured soul?

Little does he know that Mukti has her own secrets and is just as troubled as he is. Her name translates as ‘freedom’ in her native tongue Bengali, but she is anything but free.

Recent graduate Mukti Khan has just started a new job in the City and is determined to work hard and keep people at bay. All that changes after a chance encounter with the mysterious Jamie. He fascinates her like no one ever has and she just has to get to know him better. But is she truly capable of letting him in?

As an unlikely friendship develops between the two, will Jamie and Mukti be able to help each other come to terms with their pasts, or do some ghosts haunt us forever?

Set in contemporary London, this is a unique love story between two unique characters that will stay with you long after you have turned the last page.

Praise for the novel:

‘A truly fantastic read. The two main characters are cleverly crafted, impeccable. Their depth makes them feel real as they become a woven part of the reader. It is a feel-good read which I highly recommend to all who love contemporary romance. Loved it.’
—I.C. Camilleri, Author of the Blake Series

‘This is not your typical chick-lit book. There is no sloppy romance and no mushy words. This is truly a one of a kind book. Little by little, the story was told to me and it was told perfectly. I cannot believe this is Neha’s first book. It is perfect. Definitely a must-read.’
—A Novel Review

‘I loved the book. I can’t believe that this is the author’s first book; the way it’s written is excellent. I was captured from the beginning of the story. A must-read!’
—RosieReview

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Now, why did I spend the last hour writing out this Q&A to insert at the end of my book? As promised earlier, the benefits of author interviews in your e-books are below: 

Benefit #1

Everyone loves getting a little extra for their money, so bonus content of any kind will please those readers that get to the end of your e-book. Like me, you can mention this in the sales description of your book. I include something like this: ‘A 110,000-word novel with added bonus content.’ If you like, you can even mention what kinds of bonus material you’re including. 

Benefit #2

Q&As are a great way of engaging with your readers after they’ve finished your novel, and a way to make fans out of them. It gives the reader a chance to get to know you better, as you can add little snippets about your interests while you discuss the influences behind your book, or you can have a bunch of questions that are specifically about you. Readers, and humans in general, are always looking to connect—so why not give your readers a way to connect with you? 

Benefit #3

Author interviews are an ideal way for you to explain why you included anything scandalous or controversial in your book, or why a character made a decision that might not go down well with readers. Therefore, helping fans understand your book or characters better.

So, instead of having something like ‘A Note from the Author’, which is quite boring, you can spin it into a question in the Q&A, the type of question readers might ask you about the controversy. For example: ‘Why did Jane do so and so instead of this and that after prom night?’ Then you can delve into the reasons behind your characters’ controversial/unpopular decisions. 

Benefit #4

In the interview, you can talk about your other books/series by comparing the current book to your others works, thus bringing the reader’s attention to other novels of yours that might interest them. I know you have a section titled ‘More Books by This Author’ or something like that, but they’re just a list of titles. In the Q&A, you can tell the reader why they should try your other series because they’re just as good as the current book, or they’re darker/sweeter, funnier/deeper, and so on. 

Benefit #5

By including a question at the end of the interview about the projects you have lined up for the future, you can whet readers’ appetites with juicy exclusives about sequels or future projects. If you have a mailing list, you can give them the chance to sign up it to stay up-to-date with those future releases. 

Benefit #6

If you have a blog and struggle to come up with ideas on what to write every week, you can take out the spoilers from your Q&A and post it on your blog. That’s one week’s post sorted. 

Benefit #7

Talking about your books in a Q&A, even if it’s just you answering some basic questions, can help you organise your thoughts on it. Get you thinking about how to go about marketing it. Writing the blurb for it.

I suggest that you write the Q&A before you publish the book, maybe during the editing process—it’s amazing how talking to yourself about your book or characters can give you ideas on how to improve your manuscript. Questioning certain aspects and then answering those questions can also highlight any plot holes and help you fill them. 

Benefit # 8

It’s fun! Coming up with interview questions for yourself and your book, pretending to be interviewed on the radio or TV, or on a bestselling author’s blog, can get you really excited about your book, especially if editing depresses you like it does many.

That’s it for now. Happy reading xXx

Thursday, 23 August 2012

Tip for Writers: Edit, Edit, Edit


Editing usually takes longer than the time it takes to write the first draft of your story. I started writing my recently published contemporary romance novel Chasing Pavements on August 1, 2010 and completed the first draft at the end of December 2010. After several rounds of editing, I self-published it as an e-book on June 30, 2012 via Smashwords.

At first though, I had no idea how to edit. I didn’t study English at college or university, nor had I taken any writing classes, so I didn’t know where to start. Google didn’t return many helpful sites and in the end, I utilized various techniques that I stumbled upon myself.  

Firstly, I just read through the novel on my laptop, chopping and changing as I went along.  I’d gone through Chasing Pavements at least three times in this manner, before I printed it out because I didn’t feel like I was improving the manuscript, just tidying it up a little. 

To save paper/trees, I reduced the font size to the smallest I could read, single-spaced it (but with a decent margin for notes) cramming as much text on the page as possible. That was how I discovered that with around 7-8 paragraphs on one page, you can:
  • See which sections, paragraphs, or sentences are best grouped together, i.e. by theme, issue, argument.  [Use arrows to denote what should be moved where.]
  • Whether too many paragraphs start in roughly the same way, or worse, with the same few words every time.  [Avoid starting paragraphs with the name of a character, or ‘I’ if first-person POV.  Write brief notes in the margins on how you can mix it up.]
  • Think about varying the way each paragraph approaches the point it’s trying to make.  [Why not start some paragraphs by describing the outcome or the end of an event, before going back and explaining the beginning?  It need not always be in chronological order.]
  • Recognise passages that are best removed completely or condensed as they slow down the pace of the chapter.
  • Highlight which sections need to be extended or elaborated upon.  [Add words where they’re needed, a sentence or two which bring together the whole paragraph or finish one off perfectly.]
  • Make it easier to question what you have written.  [And you should always question what you have written.  Pretend you're a critic - what's the toughest question you'd ask the author?  If you were reading it for the first time, would it all make sense?  Justifying these queries will give you ideas on how to further improve your work.]
I spent around 2 hours a day after work, going through my printout, leaving notes, arrows, strikethroughs, extra sentences etc. with a red pen.  Any more than 2 hours and my concentration would dip, attention drift.  After a whole week of this, regardless of how much of the manuscript I covered, I went back to the start and repeated the process on the same hard copy, this time with a blue pen. 

With all the spelling and grammatical errors pinpointed already, and my brain mulling over the work I’d done in the last week (both consciously and unconsciously), I was able to find yet more changes that needed to be made.  Solutions to problems I couldn’t find the first time around.

At the end of this second week came the part I found boring – transferring those changes onto the digital version.  It was a quick, simple task, but not as fun as what I’d done up until then.  That’s why it was a good idea to do this in batches.  Once I’d gone through the whole manuscript and made the changes to the file on my laptop, I was ready to... print it out again.  Yes, I went over it again in the same way and of course there was still plenty I could do to improve it.  I edited it, on-and-off, up until the point I published it.

In my opinion though, there is such a thing as “over-editing”.  Sometimes, multiple re-workings leads to editing out the initial magic that was there.  You read the words so many times that you even forget what was great, original about a certain chapter in the first place.  The writing can get a little robotic.  Therefore, whilst editing, always bear in mind that you want to improve your work, not lose its best qualities.

Thank you for reading this post. If you're interested in my debut novel, click the image below to learn more about it:
 


Like all my other books, it's also available on:
iBooks   |   B&N Nook   |   Kobo |   Smashwords 


Book Details

Length: 110,000 words
Genre: Contemporary Romance / Clean Romance / Diverse Romance / Interracial Romance / Romantic Drama / Women’s Fiction

Mood: Inspirational / Feel Good / Coming of Age / Dark
Content: Sexy but No explicit sex scenes / No erotica
Audience: New Adult & College / Adult / Female Readers

Recommended for: Readers that enjoy romance novels with serious issues and characters with depth. This is a story about life, love, friendship, family, music, art, destiny and soul mates.


And the first two books in my urban fantasy/paranormal romance series, the Poison Blood series, can be downloaded for free via:

Amazon USAmazon UK|   iBooks US & UK   |   B&N Nook Store   |   Smashwords



PB1 Book Details

Length: 29,000 words
Genre: Paranormal Romance / Vampire Romance / Paranormal Fantasy / Urban Fantasy / Science Fiction & Fantasy

Mood: Dark / Humorous / Coming of age
Content: No violence / No explicit sex scenes / No erotica
Audience: Teen / Young Adult / New Adult / Adult
Recommended for: Readers that love all things vampires, slayers and witches!

Friday, 17 August 2012

Tip for Writers: Let Your Characters Dream

One interesting way of adding another dimension to your stories is to include dream sequences.  Let your characters dream, or have nightmares.  Not only is it fun for you as a writer to experiment with different styles and imagery, apply a fantasy element to the story if it's contemporary fiction, but your readers might enjoy the abstract representation of your characters’ unconscious desires or fears.  You can hint at underlying issues, secrets that will be revealed in time, and show-off another side to your writing ability.

Describe one or two dreams/nightmares as you would a normal scene in the book, but don’t be tempted to mirror real-life events – dreams are rarely fluid.  In fact, they're usually very chaotic, what with the rapid and sudden shifts in the backgrounds, the disjointedness of the settings and the lack of cohesion between the diverse stimuli your brain throws in for good measure. 

Through techniques such as association (commonly used by Freud in his dream interpretation), as well as cultural perception of what certain entities symbolize (e.g. many Muslims believe that dreaming about snakes means you have an enemy), we try to decipher the meaning or message behind these strange images that captivate us in our sleep.  Sometimes our analyses make sense, you might even deem them prophetic at a later date, and other times you come up with blanks.

But for the purposes of your book, you can actually decide what message you want the dream to send to the reader and then construct a passage that relays that in a clever, creative and abstract way.  Allow no more than a page to each dream though – you don’t want to lose the reader’s interest or attention by dwelling on these for too long.

Only my readers can tell me whether the dream sequences in Chasing Pavements added to the reading experience, but these were some of my favourite parts of the book.  We learn about Jamie's true feelings through his songs (he's a singer/songwriter), and Mukti’s dreams give us an insight into her unconscious.  It was really fun writing these sections and I hope they weren't too cryptic.  If executed well, and inserted in the right sections of the novel, I think dream sequences can act as a good storytelling mechanism.

Thank you for reading this post. If you're interested in my debut novel, click the image below to learn more about it:
 


Like all my other books, it's also available on:
iBooks   |   B&N Nook   |   Kobo |   Smashwords 


Book Details

Length: 110,000 words
Genre: Contemporary Romance / Clean Romance / Diverse Romance / Interracial Romance / Romantic Drama / Women’s Fiction

Mood: Inspirational / Feel Good / Coming of Age / Dark
Content: Sexy but No explicit sex scenes / No erotica
Audience: New Adult & College / Adult / Female Readers

Recommended for: Readers that enjoy romance novels with serious issues and characters with depth. This is a story about life, love, friendship, family, music, art, destiny and soul mates.


And the first two books in my urban fantasy/paranormal romance series, the Poison Blood series, can be downloaded for free via:

Amazon USAmazon UK|   iBooks US & UK   |   B&N Nook Store   |   Smashwords



PB1 Book Details

Length: 29,000 words
Genre: Paranormal Romance / Vampire Romance / Paranormal Fantasy / Urban Fantasy / Science Fiction & Fantasy

Mood: Dark / Humorous / Coming of age
Content: No violence / No explicit sex scenes / No erotica
Audience: Teen / Young Adult / New Adult / Adult
Recommended for: Readers that love all things vampires, slayers and witches!

Saturday, 4 August 2012

Tip for Writers: Timeline

If you’re writing a book that spans a significant period of time, or one that packs a lot of action into a few weeks, keeping track of what happens when is very important. Not just while you’re writing, but when you come to editing your manuscript and decide you want to switch things around a little. You don’t want to get your dates muddled up. Continuity is important. Readers pick up on it, so it’s important to stay on top of this.

A lot of my projects end up spanning at least a year. Don’t ask me why. My debut novel, Soulmates Saga #1, is one example. When I started it, I didn’t intend for it to cover such a long period of time, but I kept a record of all the events that took place from the very beginning. Spreadsheets were such a big part of my day at work, I set one up for my story without really thinking about it. Turned out to be one of the best things I did.

I created a Calendar for the novel on Microsoft Excel for the time period covered in the story.

So, for a book that starts in January and ends in December of the year, create 7 x 5 tables for each calendar month, with Monday-Sunday in the 7 cells across the row. Use the clock on the computer to fill in the dates (according to the actual year). Then, shade in/highlight the days/dates where all the action takes place. Add a comment (using the Add Comment/New Comment feature under the Insert/Review section of Excel) to the relevant day/date with information such as:
  • Chapter number/title
  • Event (e.g. main characters first meet)
  • Birthdays/anniversaries/important milestones
Leave notes for events not covered in the story but have taken place during the time (e.g. for back-stories, events referred to only briefly etc.). The aim is to map out the whole novel on the event-level, and you can do this before, during, and after you've written the first draft.  I recommend doing it from the start; it’s more efficient that way. 

If you need to chop and change or re-jig the order of events later, you can update the spreadsheet and refer back to it when you’re writing and editing. This way, you don't confuse yourself or the reader.

There might be some clever software out there that create calendars like these, so you can experiment with those if you like, but I’m comfortable with Excel and I’ve never looked back.

Thank you for reading this post. If you're interested in my debut novel, click the image below to learn more about it:
 


Book Details
Length: 110,000 words
Genre: Contemporary Romance / Clean Romance / Diverse Romance / Interracial Romance / Romantic Drama / Women’s Fiction

Mood: Inspirational / Feel Good / Coming of Age / Dark
Content: Sexy but No explicit sex scenes / No erotica
Audience: New Adult & College / Adult / Female Readers

Recommended for: Readers that enjoy romance novels with serious issues and characters with depth. This is a story about life, love, friendship, family, music, art, destiny and soul mates.